Tanhai ke suitcase mein,
Naye-purane zakhmon ko sametkar,
Lamhon ke khirki-darwaze band kar,
Jana Hai.
Mazhab kai hai, Bhagwan wahi.
Dard kai hai, Dil wahi.
Judai ki bus le kar, main,
Pauchunga pachtave ke stop par.
Umeed ke har store band honge aaj.
Rishton ke shahar mein curfew jo hain.
Waqt ke purse mein,
Galtiyon kay photo chupaye nahi chupte.
Mohabbat currency note hain,
Zamane ke theatre mein ghuste hi kharch ho jate hain.
Badan ke zoo mein,
Naraazgi ke kai jaanwar qaid hai, ab bhi.
Afsos ke kapdon se dhakkar, magar,
Jana hai.
Mijaz kayi hai, Mausam wahi.
Bahane kayi hai, khichav wahi.
By: NovoneeL ChakrabortY
19 comments:
I like the way u compare emotions with common things....loved these lines:
"Mijaz kayi hai, Mausam wahi. Bahane kayi hai, khichav wahi."
nice way of expression.........pls u can write so well then why do you express only negative emotions...do wrote some positive.
sure will try!!! :)
nice :) .....Gud way/style of expressing!! ......
Lines which rimi mentioned along with following say a lot,I Feel!
"Mazhab kai hai, Bhagwan wahi. Dard kai hai, Dil wahi" ... :)
I love spending the currency notes(Mohobbat) in zamane's Theatre!!! :) khee hee :)
haha!!! ... thanks for pouring in Rads!
Nice lines buddy... loved them all... But in particular:
"Mazhab kai hai, Bhagwan wahi. Dard kai hai, Dil wahi."
Keep'em comin...
KC!
Thankoooos buddy boy !!!
Whenever I am li'l tensed I just checks ur blog... and more often than not finds a writing speaking my state...
"Judai ki bus le kar, main,
Pauchunga pachtave ke stop par.
Umeed ke har store band honge aaj.
Rishton ke shahar mein curfew jo hain."........
.......
"Afsos ke kapdon se dhakkar, magar,
Jana hai."
I like the way u show women in a very strong and assertive avatar and understand their mentality so well.. Its really amazing....
Thanks Adhisa!
great poem, I loved it. each and every line of it.. nywys, im currently reading your book that kiss in the rain, and i swear, im in love with it.. when are you plannin to release your next novel ?
Thank you Princess! Well there's some time before my next (i.e. third) book arrives. Shall update accordingly.
ohh, I'm eagerly waiting for it.
I'm a huge lover of your work. can you please be my friend?
wah! Apt comparisons.
awesum ,,hard to find proper words lyk u hav used :)
Thanks Anjali !
excellent... superb..
gud 1....nyc ways of expressing!!!!btw i m reading ur novel--a thing beyond forever!!!! its awesum
Thanks Manish!
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