Questions were asked, Answers denied;
I slept, slept and slept.
Darkness transpired, Light expired;
I slept, slept and slept.
Winter arrived, Spring passed;
I slept, slept and slept.
Dreams blossomed, Hope suffered;
I slept, slept and slept.
Happiness knocked, Wounds hollered;
I slept, slept and slept.
Songs were sung, Tears oozed;
I slept, slept and slept.
Love happened, Separation followed;
But –
On the bed of Arrogance,
With the soft pillow of Ignorance,
I slept, slept and slept.
By: NovoneeL ChakrabortY
31 comments:
hey its a very sweet and cute poem.....not bad dear!!!
Nice one bro! Seems one one of ur earlier writings. But a good work!
Thanks Rimi :)
Ya Arin it is an early work ... hence the note at the end :D thanks anyways!
its a nice poem ! some deep thoughts there .. btw, how can arrogance and ignorance be together ??
Thanks for the comment as well as the query Pretty Me...
Well, Ignorance is to Arrogance as a mother is to a child...thus they are bound to be together...
Makes perfect sense !! thanks :) Hope to see you at my page again some time !
sure thing:)
it isnt immature in any sense infact i slept,slept n slept adds an aura to it..a really nice one :)
Good day!!
thanks fr dropping by :)
Thanks for your comment too ... tc
i wish i could sleep over many things and switch off reality like this person does in your poem
exceptionally well written!
Thanks Aparna.....
hheeyyy immaturityy....no ways..itz beautifulll.....
Thanks for your comment Mayuri...
Hey thats a nice one really.....
Take care....
lovely poem, Novoneel.a typical eg of innocence :)
Thanks Lipika and Tasneem for ur comments...
beautiful...its got meaning...:) so how can it be immature?:)
Thanks alot for appreciating my poem Divsi!!!
Nice and sweet poem..Well expressed
Thanks for the comment Aysha!!!
quite cute
Thanks d....
nice one.. :)
Thanks Amal!!!
dear novoneel,
i know after six years,you are very much awake now!you just can't be arrogant! nice reaching your site!
let me sleep over the unwanted and like to forget happenings!
sasneham,
anu
thanks for pouring in Anupama!
hey its a lovely poem..loved it!!
Thanks Ekata! Haven't heard from you in a long time ... how are you doing? tc
innocent...but deep
On the contrary, seemed one of the more matured handlings of the subject, in a pretty long time..
I am glad you think that way ... thanks !!!
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