Thursday, June 4, 2009

The Address

His Heart

C/O Her Heartbeats

First Sight Villa,

Sleepless Nights Avenue,

(Landmark: Tears Tower and Internal Pain Shop)

Phone Call Block, Weekend Date Building,

14, February Gift Lane,

Right turn from Trust Crossing (Away from Break-Off Cafe);

Opposite Flirt Market.

In front of Honesty and Care Salon.


P.O: HUGS & KISSES ; DIST: RESPECT


LOVE STORY – 2009


United Soul for Marriage.



By: NovoneeL ChakrabortY

11 comments:

rimi said...

very innovative!!!!!!!!!!
brilliant concept....a new and interesting read.....the words itself convey the full meaning.
i liked it alot!!!!!

ARINDAM DEY said...

wow!

anjana said...

very gud and innovative!!!!

Anonymous said...

Frankly speaking i didnt like it......it doesnt suit u to write this one.......bt ya it isnt bad...nor good either....nd ya sorry 4 d comment.....becoz i want u to do well......sorry!!!!!!!

NovoneeL ChakrabortY said...

Rimi, Arindam, Aunty ~ thanks a lot!

Anonymous ~ no probs! I appreciate your frankness ... thanks anyways!

abhijit said...

hmm... a deviation from the line your writing usually takes, but a change none the less. however, it seems the 'sting in the tail' that the other micro-stories (sorry for the awful coinage) have, is a potent factor in making them special. isn't it? :)

NovoneeL ChakrabortY said...

Thanks for the comment ... I got no idea what makes something special :D

Shilpa said...

I liked the pic you attached to it. When I read the address it seemed like a school boy in love for the first time but then I re- read, felt it to be a perfect address for a happily married couple (somewhat utopia!!!)

NovoneeL ChakrabortY said...

Ya its Utopia because first love often is ... :) thanks for puring in your thought Shilpa.

AnuRadha GarimelLa said...

Nice :)

n B c said...

Thanks Rads!