His Heart
C/O Her Heartbeats
First Sight Villa,
Sleepless Nights Avenue,
(Landmark:
Phone Call Block,
14, February
Right turn from Trust Crossing (Away from Break-Off Cafe);
Opposite Flirt Market.
In front of Honesty and Care Salon.
P.O: HUGS & KISSES ; DIST: RESPECT
LOVE STORY – 2009
United Soul for Marriage.
By: NovoneeL ChakrabortY
11 comments:
very innovative!!!!!!!!!!
brilliant concept....a new and interesting read.....the words itself convey the full meaning.
i liked it alot!!!!!
wow!
very gud and innovative!!!!
Frankly speaking i didnt like it......it doesnt suit u to write this one.......bt ya it isnt bad...nor good either....nd ya sorry 4 d comment.....becoz i want u to do well......sorry!!!!!!!
Rimi, Arindam, Aunty ~ thanks a lot!
Anonymous ~ no probs! I appreciate your frankness ... thanks anyways!
hmm... a deviation from the line your writing usually takes, but a change none the less. however, it seems the 'sting in the tail' that the other micro-stories (sorry for the awful coinage) have, is a potent factor in making them special. isn't it? :)
Thanks for the comment ... I got no idea what makes something special :D
I liked the pic you attached to it. When I read the address it seemed like a school boy in love for the first time but then I re- read, felt it to be a perfect address for a happily married couple (somewhat utopia!!!)
Ya its Utopia because first love often is ... :) thanks for puring in your thought Shilpa.
Nice :)
Thanks Rads!
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