Thursday, September 3, 2009

Yaad Aayen

Zindagi ek gale ki kharash,

Aur tum, adrak ki chai.

Bukhaar ke dino main,

Mathe par bheege rumal ka rakhna...

Jeena jaise ghanton ki bhuk,

Aur tum, ma ke haath ka khana.


Umeed ek chori ka samaan,

Aur tum, Diwali ki mithai.

School ke dino main,

Har din hajri dene ka mazhab...

Honsla ek ad-jali si mombatti,

Aur tum, sukoon ki neend.


Pareshaani ek daravni si parchayi,

Aur tum, shaadi ki shennai.

Ruksat ke dino main,

Gehri neend se achanak jag uthna...

Mann ek thaka hua musafir,

Aur tum, hawai jahaz ka udna.


Maut shaam ki ek local train,

Aur tum, baagiche main khelte bachche.

Mulaqat ke dino main,

Waqt ka bewajah fanaa hona...

Main sirf ek guzarta hua lamha,

Aur tum…barso ki yaari.




By: NovoneeL ChakrabortY

19 comments:

Anonymous said...

2 gud.................tui poems o noveler moton bhalo likhish.........keep it up

n B c said...

thank u :)

swati said...

u write very well..neel..
God bless!

n B c said...

Thanks Swati for your appreciation and also for taking out time to pour in for each post...

rimi said...

a great attempt......loved d last few lines!!!

n B c said...

Tan Q :)

The Salesman said...

loved the poem! superb

n B c said...

Shukriya!

Rustles of a mystic mind said...

darun

n B c said...

Thank you D!

dipan said...

I went through all the articles,i lyked dem..
Carry on!!!

n B c said...

Thanks for your time Dipan!

Deepa said...

Just finished reading ur book 'That kiss in the rain' last nite.. finished the book in one go only to realise that it was 3 am and i had to wake up for office at 6 am...:) so decided i shud leave this comment for u to know that ur book really kept me engrossed and i have swollen eye bags to work today :)...Good work...what's next now :)

n B c said...

Thanks Deepa!!! not sure of the next...yet to start!

solitary writer said...

Main sirf ek guzarta hua lamha,

Aur tum…barso ki yaari.
one of best composed lines i have ever read...seeing ur composition i feel like writing more

n B c said...

Thank you :)

Anonymous said...

wonderful metaphors novoneel..keep going.. all the best

n B c said...

Thanks!!

shreya jain said...

You are brilliant man! The way u hav expressed each line.. each word.. m in luv wid novo's way f writing :)