Bheed-Bhaad ke pahado mein,
Khamoshi ban ke ghoomta hoon.
Takrata hoon beetein palon se,
Aur,
Ek gehri saans ban ke barasta hoon.
Samjhote ki mitti se,
Jahan Dafan hai laashe;
Uski, meri aur humari…
Tanhai se mulakaat hoti hain, aksar.
Hum bhaitte hain ghanto
Aur,
Dard ka shagun baatte hain.
Haseen shabdo ke beech,
Jahan chippi hai kayi
Uski, meri aur humari.
Jab waqt fizool nikalta hai,
Tum mujhe sulana chahti ho?
Aur jab wohi waqt ek barf ban jata hai,
Tum mujhe rulana chahti ho?
Ek kharab si lift ban ke rah
Na upar jane ki taakat baki hai,
Aur,
Na neeche jane ka koi maksad.
Har kone mein jiske giraft hai,
Intezaar ki ek Mahek;
Uski, meri aur humari.
By: NovoneeL ChakrabortY
9 comments:
Too good mate...
" Dil ek Qabr hai. Samjhote ki mitti se, Jahan Dafan hai laashe; Uski, meri aur humari… "
Just too good!!!
thanks chekov! actually those r my fav too! :P
" Dil ek Qabr hai. Samjhote ki mitti se, Jahan Dafan hai laashe; Uski, meri aur humari… "
you said so much in these lines, one needs to read between the lines to understnd the depth of what came from your mind. excellent!
Thanks Shilpa ...
this hs been so far ur best composition among all ur hindi compositions...too gud dear!!!
Thanks Editor sahiba! :)
Dil ek Qabr hai.
Samjhote ki mitti se,
Jahan Dafan hai laashe;
Uski, meri aur humari…
these lines make me cry in my loneliness...u write ultimate what a common man feels but is unable to express
one cud never feel gud by a metaphor like qabr.. wonderful creation...
Thank you !!
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