Dum lu bhi toh kaise,
Khwabo mein aana ab tumhe manzoor nahi.
Tumahri aawazo ki sui si chubhan zinda rakhti hai mujhe.
Bechani meri suhagan hai,
Sukoon meri vidhwa.
Haqeqat se jannat ki dooriyon ko
Zindagi kaha karte the kabhi.
Unki aawaz ki gaaliche main let kar
Sadiyaan paar kar lete the kabhi.
Bachpan mein khilono ke tootne se
Hum ro liya karte the kabhi
Ab khilone tootte hai bhi toh kya?
Bahano ke bazaar se waqt milta hi nahi.
Rok nahi sakta mann ke darwazon se
Beete waqt ki roshni ko, magar.
Aaj aur kal ke ek room ke flat mein
Andhera kayam rehta hai abhi.
Bhool jau bhi toh kaise,
Zindagi ka sweater chota lagta hai abhi.
Tumhari awaazo ki rui se dabkar
Neend aa jati hai kabhi.
By: NovoneeL ChakrabortY
17 comments:
"Bachpan mein khilono ke tootne se
Hum ro liya karte the kabhi
Ab khilone tootte hai bhi toh kya? Bahano ke bazaar se waqt milta hi nahi."
Loved these words...
Kudos mate...
You are a natural...
Waiting for more more and more...
Nice use of words.........plssssssssssss write something positive ...........
Jo Hukum !!!
b'ful words u said.....
very true....dese lines are ausum...
"Bachpan mein khilono ke tootne se
Hum ro liya karte the kabhi
Ab khilone tootte hai bhi toh kya? Bahano ke bazaar se waqt milta hi nahi."
Thanks Palki!
Thanks Lipika!!!
novoneel sir...i loved this post. i started following your blog today as i got myself your novel a thing beyond forever as a christmas gift.
you are really a true soul touching writer..
I myself am a poetess. i have written over 400 poems(in hindi) and this one inspired me to go ahead as it seems there is lot more to achieve. u really touched my soul. i would love to read some more of these.
Thanks a lot Supriya! It feels great to know there are people who still take interest in the sentiments expressed in Hindi ... take care and God Bless u and your writing instinct!
beautiful poem :)
Truly Impressive..... read ur both books and I feel the way you explain the emotions with a simplicity is truly touching
Thanks a lot Deepali for your feedback and also for pouring in here! take care!!!
your every word are heart touching,you always challange the rule of life through ur words bcs its true bt nobody accept it ,and atlast ur i love and enjoy ur quotations;;;;;;;;;thanx write something more about true love plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz!!!!!!!!!!!!
Will try to do so :) thanks for your time!
hi, read ur buk that kiss in rain.
i have so many things to say and ask.don't know frm where to start. it was a nice buk but tellme jst 1 thing. y u leave the end of ur buks on reader's imagination? whether haasilor palki meet? or whether radhika or laya meet?
i thought 4 whole 2 days.
anyway as expected ur buk has d same effect as d previous 1 had.all d best and may god bless u.
waiting 4 ur answer
shuchi
Thanks for your comment Shuchi...I feel comfortable by completing a story in a way whereby I can keep the embers of a new possible journey alive ... a journey never ends ... especially when the intention of it is love ...
take care and God Bless!
hi
thanx 4 ur answer. i was waiting 4 ur reply. i m trying to cum out of that sadness which i felt after i finished d buk. hope ur answer will help me.last but nt d least.
HATS OFF 2 U SIR.
waiting 4 ur next buk
god bless u
shuchi
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