Wednesday, August 29, 2012

Pehli Baar

Wrote a Hindi poem after a long time. Thought of sharing. Cheers!

'Pehli Baar'

Jab humne ek dusre ko dekha,
Kahin kisi bachche ne pehli baar Ma kaha hoga.

Jab humne ek dusre ko pehchana,
Kahin kisi gaon mein pehli baar bijli aayi hogi.

Jab humne ek dusre ko mehsoos kiya,
Kahin kisi naujawaan ko pehli tankhwa mili hogi.

Jab humne ek dusre ko samjha,
Kahin kisi garmi se tang rickshewale ko din ki pehli savaari mili hogi.

Jab humne ek dusre ke saath, saath phere liye,
Kahin kisi padhe-likhe ko bhagwan par yakin hua hoga.

Jab humne ek dusre ko chuwa,
Kahin kisi qaidi ko sukoon ki neend aayi hogi.

Jab humne ek dusre ko savara,
Kahin kisi musafir ne, zara rukkar, ghar basane ki thani hogi.

Jab hum ek dusre se bichchre,
Kahin kisi kavi ne apni kavita puri kari hogi.

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19 comments:

Amal said...

I've got goosebumps after reading this. Thanx 4 explaining these feeling so simply yet so elegantly.

Ali baig said...

Awesome!! Very well written!

Novoneel Chakraborty said...

Amal: Thanks !!

Ali: Thanks !!

directorsvision said...

beautiful.. you can write a bengali version of this as well, i have a feeling it will be even better...

Anonymous said...

nice, interesting and full of facts, as usual a good creation

Novoneel Chakraborty said...

Thanks!!

Mahi S said...

Beautiful.....last two line are jst amazing..

Lebnox said...

The last line did it all for me. Brilliant! :)

Anonymous said...

rocking......heart touching........u r always..out-standig novoneel....


good luck

Hemant said...

The only thing what I liked about this poem is the last two lines. Apart from this, the poem has been penned very honestly, without thinking of any rhyme or any literature complexities...

shreya ''The best is yet to come'' said...

rnice n touching...gud to read.

antra..... said...

really something.....i wonder if u r a better poet or writer...God Bless... :)

elizabeth mary gomes said...

beautiful...
loved it...
keep dreaming and keep writting...
:)

Novoneel Chakraborty said...

Thanks for your comments Mahi, Lebnox, Antara, Hemant, Shreya and Elizabeth.

Anonymous said...

Aww.... nice

Richa Saini said...

Speechless!!

Narayani said...

Bemisal!

Stuti Tiwari said...

It was lovely :) I read a hindi poem after a long time and this piece just made it worth! :)

prasad rane said...

Superb