Wrote a Hindi poem after a long time. Thought of sharing. Cheers!
'Pehli Baar'
Jab humne ek dusre ko dekha,
Kahin kisi bachche ne pehli baar Ma
kaha hoga.
Jab humne ek dusre ko pehchana,
Kahin kisi gaon mein pehli baar
bijli aayi hogi.
Jab humne ek dusre ko mehsoos kiya,
Kahin kisi naujawaan ko pehli tankhwa
mili hogi.
Jab humne ek dusre ko samjha,
Kahin kisi garmi se tang
rickshewale ko din ki pehli savaari mili hogi.
Jab humne ek dusre ke saath, saath phere
liye,
Kahin kisi padhe-likhe ko bhagwan
par yakin hua hoga.
Jab humne ek dusre ko chuwa,
Kahin kisi qaidi ko sukoon ki neend aayi hogi.
Jab humne ek dusre ko savara,
Kahin kisi musafir ne, zara rukkar,
ghar basane ki thani hogi.
Jab hum ek dusre se bichchre,
Kahin kisi kavi ne apni kavita puri
kari hogi.
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18 comments:
I've got goosebumps after reading this. Thanx 4 explaining these feeling so simply yet so elegantly.
Awesome!! Very well written!
Amal: Thanks !!
Ali: Thanks !!
beautiful.. you can write a bengali version of this as well, i have a feeling it will be even better...
nice, interesting and full of facts, as usual a good creation
Beautiful.....last two line are jst amazing..
The last line did it all for me. Brilliant! :)
rocking......heart touching........u r always..out-standig novoneel....
good luck
The only thing what I liked about this poem is the last two lines. Apart from this, the poem has been penned very honestly, without thinking of any rhyme or any literature complexities...
rnice n touching...gud to read.
really something.....i wonder if u r a better poet or writer...God Bless... :)
beautiful...
loved it...
keep dreaming and keep writting...
:)
Thanks for your comments Mahi, Lebnox, Antara, Hemant, Shreya and Elizabeth.
Aww.... nice
Speechless!!
Bemisal!
It was lovely :) I read a hindi poem after a long time and this piece just made it worth! :)
WOW..Awesome..At last my heart fill up withe words,"Jab hum dono tutkar khub roye
tab pehli baarkisi samandar mein tufaan aya hoga.."
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